tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-120847508671813248.post8615458558718995679..comments2020-12-24T06:10:41.967-08:00Comments on Come Out & Play: 11:54 a.m.Sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08335450550183639234noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-120847508671813248.post-32001470992230203212009-11-03T13:49:07.850-08:002009-11-03T13:49:07.850-08:00hi sarah! this is such an awesome project!! congra...hi sarah! this is such an awesome project!! congrats to you and joe. i LOVE the cover and most of the design. i like the concept of having a book cover for each story. some constructive critique: the writing is a bit vanilla to me. i guess because the topic is sex, i was expecting a lot more frankness and raunch, you know? these people sound like they're writing short essays to their english 101 prof. then again, my expectations may be a bit skewed because i read Butt. haha anyway, i love the idea. and congrats on the first issue. hope you guys are awesome.ray de mesahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15221043535237178256noreply@blogger.com